9. "That voice," 1st paragraph, "That voice could be his," Second paragraph. He connects them to connect the whole story.
10. I think he did that to connect the story all together and make everything add back to the story in the end so it didn't look like he trailed off.
11. Yes
12. Yes, I wanted to see if I recognized his voice.
13. It made me realize that good things come to those who not only wait, but who continue to reach for it.
14. yes, you really needed to hear his voice and hear his pain to understand.
15. he added quotes of the guy from the video
16. he put it in italics.
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