Thursday, December 8, 2016

Peer-Critique

Gracie Angeli - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pm_o-7zbivCoBOt9KfPPDwP5QhyLnHkVcG9Win4PTV4/edit?usp=sharing

1. Joshua Angeli, Kim Angeli and Stephen Angeli
2. Joshua was diagnosed with Acute Lymphoblastic Leukemia in 2011, when he was 15 years old. He was declared cancer-free in his freshman year of college, when he was thinking of what he wanted to do with his life. His family is thankful for what happened and how it has shaped their family, but they hope nobody else has to go through that.
3. 20
4. 885
5. 10
6. 3
7. “I don’t think that I would still be the person I am today without my Leukemia, because my challenges and my difficulty with the sickness made me into a stronger, better person, and I’m extremely thankful everyone that helped me get through this difficult portion of my life, because I don’t know if I would be here without them. I’m so blessed to have so much love in my life to hold me up,” Joshua said.
8. Last paragraph
9. Yes, I wanted to read more about how he got through it.
10. Maybe a friend of his, to show what the friendship is like.
11. Yes
12. How did he feel about his hair?
13. 15 year-old Beats Cancer After 3 Years of Treatment; His Thoughts
14. Joshua is very strong and I applaud him for going through things I can't even imagine going through.
15. 95

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